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Laura Hume's avatar

This is my first Sunday Coffee (black here) and I love your stuff, but I have one editing suggestion you might want to watch for.

Don't write "junior high school girl". That's substantively different from a girl who's a junior in high school.

Continue leading the good fight!

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Deborah Robson's avatar

Thanks for making this comment so I didn't have to. It doesn't change the statutory rape situation, but it does make a rather large difference in specificity.

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Jan Hemelstrand's avatar

Thank you, Laura. I noticed this too and IтАЩm glad you pointed it out.

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